Detached
I feel distant,
Removed,
As though, I do not belong.
Worse, I never did!
Love shouldn’t feel like that, should it?
Is it me running away?
Or are the waves receding?
I’m left utterly despondent.
I fear abandonment.
I fear helplessness.
I fear being me.
I fear.
And fear makes us do all sorts of crazy things.
You stole words from my mouth.. ๐
Kudos. Loved it.
June 2, 2014 at 3:59 pm
๐ Thanks
June 2, 2014 at 9:16 pm
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June 2, 2014 at 11:19 pm
Now both of you have stolen my brain! Lol
June 4, 2014 at 7:46 pm
That’s a lie. We tried to stole it, but couldn’t find anything. ๐
Just kidding.. ๐
June 4, 2014 at 11:51 pm
Lol ๐
June 5, 2014 at 12:50 am
I’ve read a few of your piece-quite nice.
June 4, 2014 at 4:54 am
Thanks Lana ๐
June 4, 2014 at 9:12 am
You’re welcome
June 4, 2014 at 6:13 pm
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Wow!! It’s as though you read my mind! I love it! Though I can see the end to my fear and that’s a wonderful feeling! God bless you my friend!
June 4, 2014 at 7:45 pm
I just said the same that she just stole the words from my mouth. So, we all are feeling the same thing?
Interesting!
June 4, 2014 at 11:52 pm
Very that show’s how relatable the piece it!! Or sad we can all relate
June 5, 2014 at 12:52 am
It’s beautiful and sad! ๐
June 5, 2014 at 8:53 am
You speak for so many of us …may i ask What is it that makes you feel so distant? Thank you for sharing your heart
June 9, 2014 at 8:11 pm
I don’t know what or how. ๐
June 21, 2014 at 11:36 pm
I love the way it concludes.
July 9, 2014 at 10:48 am
I love that you took time to read it ๐
July 9, 2014 at 11:22 am
I love the last part, and recognize something in it, a lot actually.
“I fear abandonment.
I fear helplessness.
I fear being me.
I fear.
And fear makes us do all sorts of crazy things.”
I would love to live a fearless live…..I’ll follow your blog, ’cause I love the writing in combination with the photo’s.
October 14, 2014 at 11:15 pm
Thanks Jeanette ๐
December 16, 2014 at 3:42 pm