Comfortably Broken
And Some Days I Like To Let Myself Be.
Oh, It Does Get Exasperating,
It’s Unnerving, This Joy Brewing Within
But The realization That It Won’t Last
Is Comforting
Turmoil Is Not Just A Phase
It’s A Way Of Life For Some People
Some People Like Me
People Who Don’t See The Point In Being Happy All The Time
People Who Don’t Mind The Ache
People Who’ve Found A Way To Tread On The Frozen River Of Sorrow And Loneliness
Self Enforced Sorrow And Loneliness…
Living Perpetually In Fear
Wanting Nothing More Than To Just Sink
And Get It Over With
But Some days
We Love To Break Away From The Mundane Obligation Of Being Miserable
And We Smile. A full, Broken Hearted, Smile
You See
Who Doesn’t Like Change…
Even If For A Little While.
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It feels like I crashed into my reflection, etched into the wall. Every word; cutting in deep. I can’t critique this. I feel it, too much.
– Siddharth
July 1, 2013 at 5:52 pm
As much as I’d love for you to critique it,
You relating to my words means much! 🙂
July 1, 2013 at 6:23 pm
Nicely written, We all humans one day reach a yielding point in our miserable life, few lose their faith and cut their lives, while few welcome the pain, smiling in its face allowing it to through all at self, and yet they endure. Have a look at http://hckkid.wordpress.com/2013/06/25/thank-you/ . Where the character yields to all that he faced for love, thanking his love to make him face all of it.
July 1, 2013 at 6:16 pm
And then someday they get nice and long lecture from a wise old man as written in my poem Rise http://hckkid.wordpress.com/2013/05/03/rise/ . I know its long but i hope it would motivate few someday 😛 .
July 1, 2013 at 6:18 pm
Thanks!
Sure… I’ll give it a look see 🙂
July 1, 2013 at 6:23 pm
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July 2, 2013 at 1:24 am
I sense that this piece distills down to hope. I like this contrast and it’s perceived resolution. Well done.
July 2, 2013 at 5:27 am
Thanks Mike! 🙂
July 2, 2013 at 11:33 am
Simply love the last two lines
“Who Doesn’t Like Change…
Even If For A Little While.”
July 2, 2013 at 8:46 am
🙂 I’m glad Kenrick!
July 2, 2013 at 11:34 am
wonderfully written especially the end about wanting a little change in life. I am not sure if I have read any other post on this blog that has ended so brightly, so positively and with so much hope. Maybe I’ve missed the others 😦 but this is very beautiful. I’m glad to have read this 🙂 xoxo
July 4, 2013 at 5:37 am
Actually I write darker endings… 🙂
Thanks Nits! 🙂 xoxo
July 4, 2013 at 11:23 am
Amazing artwork and powerful poetry. I like the description. I could feel the struggle and confusion. You are a amazing writer. I felt the words of the excellent poetry.
July 7, 2013 at 11:17 am
Appreciate it John! 🙂 So stop by often.
July 8, 2013 at 2:48 pm